Saturday, 26 February 2011

The night outside

BANG, a noise in the night
The pounding of your heart in fright
You wonder who
But the dark it shows no clue

The moon as pale as snow
The stars shining far and low
A noise echo's through the night
But nothing can be seen from plain sight
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2 comments:

  1. Alexa6 June 2011 at 14:02

    Hi, Millie!
    Your poetry is very sweet, like a cherry cordial (those are my favorite). I love that each poem has a bit of a deeper meaning. Beautiful last line on this one!

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  2. millie7 June 2011 at 12:53

    thanks i'm glad you like it! :)

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